Bit of motorsport stuff
Discussion
Yellabelly said:
No 1 is actually spot on to the rule of thirds, which just shows how wrong that can be. In this instance I would crop a good amount out of the foreground, but it is a good image as is No2 but No6 has it all, especially his expression "WTF are you doing there???"
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YB
shows how tastes vary - I really like #1 - that amount of tarmac gives it a dramatic edge that it would lose with a closer crop
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Thanks for the comments. The feedback is very interesting and shot one is definitely a marmite one. I personally like it due to the expanse of shaded foreground tarmac. Some might work better when not in a 3:2 format. Also interesting that there is no comment on #8...one of my favourites lol.
Thanks again.
PF
Thanks again.
PF
I like the composition of no. 1 - dramatic and creative, but the processing is a bit bland and washed out....a bolder approach (to the processing) would really give the composition more 'confidence' IMHO
3 doesn't work for me, perhaps waiting a split-second for the foreground car to come closer (so it would be on the left of the image and the chasing car on the right) and be less hidden by the crest.
5 is a great idea, but I think the wide perspective is a little off-putting. I know it was probably pretty tight in there, but if this was taken from even 2-3m back it would be a winner for me.
8 is ok, not as original as the others and although I assume the element in the foreground is some tyre debris, it does look like a dried-up dog turd and is distracting as a result. Maybe getting closer and focussing on the shredded rubber (keeping the pit-buildings in shot, in or out of the dof) would be a more original and interesting approach?
2&4 on the other hand are very well executed and processed, especially love the dramatic sky on 4. 2 could benefit from a little wider view to show more of those lovely colours in the background.
But it's 6&7 that are the heroes here! Both excellent shots that I can't see how to improve on!
All this IMHO of course, overall a great set! I take it you're a pro?
3 doesn't work for me, perhaps waiting a split-second for the foreground car to come closer (so it would be on the left of the image and the chasing car on the right) and be less hidden by the crest.
5 is a great idea, but I think the wide perspective is a little off-putting. I know it was probably pretty tight in there, but if this was taken from even 2-3m back it would be a winner for me.
8 is ok, not as original as the others and although I assume the element in the foreground is some tyre debris, it does look like a dried-up dog turd and is distracting as a result. Maybe getting closer and focussing on the shredded rubber (keeping the pit-buildings in shot, in or out of the dof) would be a more original and interesting approach?
2&4 on the other hand are very well executed and processed, especially love the dramatic sky on 4. 2 could benefit from a little wider view to show more of those lovely colours in the background.
But it's 6&7 that are the heroes here! Both excellent shots that I can't see how to improve on!
All this IMHO of course, overall a great set! I take it you're a pro?
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