Safari photos - comments?
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nky_84

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137 posts

237 months

Monday 28th September 2009
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Hi guys,

Just back from Safari and trawling through my 2,000 odd images. I'm finding it difficult to see past the amazing subjects and work out if a given picture is actually any good?! Recently purchased a 450D and Kenya was the first proper chance i had to experiement with it, still lots to learn!

What are peoples thoughts on the below, and can anyone advise on some photoshop techniques to improve my shots prior to printing?





















This one, im considering getting printed on some sort of canvas frame, but dont want to spend the dosh to find it'll turn out crap!

thanks for looking

Nick

deuchars

273 posts

245 months

Monday 28th September 2009
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Great pictures;)

Edited by deuchars on Monday 28th September 22:21

Dogsey

4,301 posts

260 months

Monday 28th September 2009
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Not sure the B&W shots do the subjects any justice and most of the others look a little flat colourwise, although I am on the (uncalibrated) laptop at the moment. Compositional that look pretty good though.


CVP

2,799 posts

305 months

Monday 28th September 2009
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The leopard in the tree is very nicely composed and such a nice spot on safari

Chris

cc8s

4,258 posts

233 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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I like the yawning Lion. Nice catch!

jon-

16,534 posts

246 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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Dogsey said:
Not sure the B&W shots do the subjects any justice and most of the others look a little flat colourwise, although I am on the (uncalibrated) laptop at the moment. Compositional that look pretty good though.
I'd tend to agree with this. The colours in 2, 3 and 4 are a touch flat, you could do them more justice by upping the saturation a little. Not to the point where everything looks fake (like I often end up doing!) but just to give the pictures a lift.

The image you've highlighted will make a nice print, but I'd crop it down a little to make sure you could see a little more detail on the animals.

Edited by jon- on Tuesday 29th September 08:29

dcw@pr

3,516 posts

273 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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i like the cheetah best, but it could do with a lot more contrast+saturation.

BenjC

677 posts

278 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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I would up the saturation and have a play with cropping some of the unwanted grass, tree, guff, that distracts you from the animal - Also remeber the rule of 3rds.....

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds

Below are a couple from a trip I did last year:






plg101

4,106 posts

240 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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I love 4 + the sunset. Nice work!

Tiggsy

10,261 posts

282 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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as above, flat colours and a bit bland with the framing.

compare the lion in your 2nd shot with the one just above.

...Mole...

2,780 posts

221 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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Nice photos, Colours look a little undersaturated though.

size13

2,033 posts

287 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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Hope you don't mind, but I had a play...




Nice picture though - wish i could get out into the "real" safari instead of behind cages!

Edited by size13 on Tuesday 29th September 15:39

_dobbo_

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278 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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I'd agree with the comments about them all being a bit lacking in saturation/contrast.

What I think lets these down more though is that in most of them there is a very cluttered background, which detracts from the subject. With the zebra it's a pile of wood, the cheetah it's the leaves, the lioness it's a tree. That's probably why (for me) the Lion works best as it's more isolated.

I realise this was probably pretty hard to avoid as you can't make the animals go where you need them to...

I'm off on a Kenyan safari very soon so it's nice to see what sort of results other people are getting, thanks for sharing!

smile

BenjC

677 posts

278 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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_dobbo_ said:
I'd agree with the comments about them all being a bit lacking in saturation/contrast.

What I think lets these down more though is that in most of them there is a very cluttered background, which detracts from the subject. With the zebra it's a pile of wood, the cheetah it's the leaves, the lioness it's a tree. That's probably why (for me) the Lion works best as it's more isolated.

I realise this was probably pretty hard to avoid as you can't make the animals go where you need them to...

I'm off on a Kenyan safari very soon so it's nice to see what sort of results other people are getting, thanks for sharing!

smile
Like you say you can't escape the scenery - so work with what you have. The leopard shot above would have been stunning if you could have taken a closer shot and included the contrast between the canopy of the tree and the colours of the beast. Mind you good luck getting close without it buggering off!!

A lot of the time on safari you are in a landy - with the engine idling - so if you can ask the guide to switch off whenever possible to get your shots it will make a difference to the sharpness.

Take a beanbag to use as a support - if you forget use rolled up jumper just get your camera still to take the shot if you are going for detail.

Below are a couple with foliage to show that you can use it to give you a feel that you are "on safari" rather than in a zoo.

I used a Nikkor 70mm-300mm with a crop factor of 1.5x - that was long enough to capture most beasties.





nky_84

Original Poster:

137 posts

237 months

Tuesday 29th September 2009
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jon- said:
Dogsey said:
Not sure the B&W shots do the subjects any justice and most of the others look a little flat colourwise, although I am on the (uncalibrated) laptop at the moment. Compositional that look pretty good though.
I'd tend to agree with this. The colours in 2, 3 and 4 are a touch flat, you could do them more justice by upping the saturation a little. Not to the point where everything looks fake (like I often end up doing!) but just to give the pictures a lift.

The image you've highlighted will make a nice print, but I'd crop it down a little to make sure you could see a little more detail on the animals.

Edited by jon- on Tuesday 29th September 08:29
Thanks for all the constructive comments guys. I'll take a look at upping the contrast and saturation and see if i can bring out the colours a bit more, any other techniques i can try?

My worry with cropping the wildebeast is that if im wanting this blown up to a decent size, maybe even 1m across, i want to retain as much of the quality as possible. Im sure it will look spot on from a slight distance, but might end up with a mess on closer inspection?

nky_84

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137 posts

237 months

Wednesday 30th September 2009
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ok, i've taken your advice, and...........


















Edited by nky_84 on Wednesday 30th September 00:07

D4VE 3LL

964 posts

235 months

Wednesday 30th September 2009
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Comparing the two, the slightly edited ones look much better now, really bring the subject out on the screen smile Love the leopard in the tree, really well framed and would love to go on Safari one day.

nky_84

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137 posts

237 months

Thursday 1st October 2009
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D4VE 3LL said:
Comparing the two, the slightly edited ones look much better now, really bring the subject out on the screen smile Love the leopard in the tree, really well framed and would love to go on Safari one day.
Thanks :-). Have to say, im very happy with the results. Still can't believe i didnt spot the flat colours prior to posting here!thanks again guys.

Safari was fantastic, thoroughly recommend it to anyone who is considering, It's definitely worth the extra cost over your average holiday imo. Its not a relaxing holiday however, up before 6am most mornings and some long drives over dodgy roads if your travelling to different reserves. Be sure to book a week at the beach to recover afterwards!

Simpo Two

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295 months

Thursday 1st October 2009
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nky_84 said:


This one, im considering getting printed on some sort of canvas frame, but dont want to spend the dosh to find it'll turn out crap!
Just playing...


leyorkie

1,816 posts

206 months

Thursday 1st October 2009
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What lens did you use with your 450D? I assume they were quite long shots.
Great shots fantastic

Edited by leyorkie on Friday 2nd October 08:33