Criticise me... selling my car
Criticise me... selling my car
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jnoosh

Original Poster:

15 posts

161 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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Hi all,

I am selling my Astra, well trying to sell my astra..
It has been on for two weeks with only one person interested, who decided it was too far to come and see it.
I need to sell quite soon now, as my new car is expected to be delivered next week, I can not justify insuring two cars though.
I have it advertised on ebay, motors.co.uk, gumtree and ph classifieds (obviously) I don't have it on autotrader yet, as it is so damn expensive!
I have it on at £4500, it is the second cheapest in my mileage and age range on the whole of eBay, same on motors.co.uk and on ph classifieds.

Its the 150ps astra 1.9cdti, 61K miles, FSH, taxed and mot'd, on a 06 plate.
It is a desirable car, decent power output, cheap to run, family hatch etc.

Can anyone shed some light as to why I am getting no interest? any improvements or criticisms welcomed!

link to listing on PH:
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ETA

No links to ads for whatever reason.

Edited by Big Al. on Tuesday 4th September 17:55


Edited by jnoosh on Friday 28th June 14:07

stoocake

330 posts

188 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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Awful awful awful pictures. There seriously is no excuse these days for there to be a hazy, out of focus, small, grainy picture on an advert and any advert I see where even the thumbnail looks crap, I'll skip right past it.

In fact that's exactly what I did when I clicked the link, I didn't even read the text, just came back here to reply.

Sorry, I've worded that very harshly but I hope you understand.

crazy about cars

4,454 posts

185 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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stoocake said:
Awful awful awful pictures. There seriously is no excuse these days for there to be a hazy, out of focus, small, grainy picture on an advert and any advert I see where even the thumbnail looks crap, I'll skip right past it.

In fact that's exactly what I did when I clicked the link, I didn't even read the text, just came back here to reply.

Sorry, I've worded that very harshly but I hope you understand.
Agreed. Not to mention overpriced too.

jnoosh

Original Poster:

15 posts

161 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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crazy about cars said:
Agreed. Not to mention overpriced too.
You think it is overpriced?
I have checked everywhere and this is the one of the cheapest 150ps astras with less than 80K miles I can find.
What do you think I should have it priced at?
Cheers,

mrmr96

13,736 posts

220 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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crazy about cars said:
Agreed.
Yup. The photos themselves are posed ok etc, I think the main thing wrong with them is that there's something wrong with the camera lens. Must be dirt or grease or something on it which has cause the photos to be all blurry. You can get a new digital camera for like £50, which might be worth it when the car's several grands worth!

mboon

955 posts

218 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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Pics are not very good, you have a red car so will do yourself a favour by using a decent camera and showing the paint has not faded.

Bit more detail in the for sale add, you have the basics, give a little personal touch on the car.

Spanna

3,736 posts

192 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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Add in how many previous owners and how long you had the car, this is where you could add in that 'personal touch'. I would also detail the service history and what was done at the last service.

Pictures are most certainly the stopping point though, they really aren't very good are they? An ad with poor or no pictures gets no interest from me unless it's something rare and the written part is exactly what I wanted to read.

jnoosh

Original Poster:

15 posts

161 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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Updated pics and description.
Anything else?
Cheers for all the advice btw.

mboon

955 posts

218 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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I see your new pics, very nice. I always find getting down lower and taking photos gives the car a slightly better look, could just be me and the cars I have owned but I find getting down to its level really does make the car look its best.

Munter

31,330 posts

257 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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I thought you were all being a bit harsh on his photos....now I realise they are new ones! smile

Munter

31,330 posts

257 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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I did a search on 150bhp diesel astras in the beta classifieds and you are not in it. I would edit the details (currently 147) up to 150 bhp to make sure you turn up in searches.

jnoosh

Original Poster:

15 posts

161 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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Cheers everyone.
All the advise so far has been acted upon, new pics, enhanced description, personal touch etc.
If I sell this weekend, around the list price, I'll send you all a fiver biggrin
Any more advise more than welcome, no matter how small.

Vulgar LS2

1,785 posts

199 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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The new pics are OK but can't you take it somewhere nice with plenty of room about, like a country park.

Things I like to see are.

Show me the service book
Pic of the boot
Pic of under the bonnett
Show me the wheels close up (each one)
Show me the drivers seat including the bolster, don't drape the seatbelt over the seat in the pic.


Don't have reflections of other cars in your pics it looks too busy.

How many pics are you allowed on PH?

Munter

31,330 posts

257 months

Tuesday 4th September 2012
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Vulgar LS2 said:
How many pics are you allowed on PH?
9 I think.



Craikeybaby

11,523 posts

241 months

Wednesday 5th September 2012
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Out of the four places you have it listed, I wouldn't even look at three of them if I was buying a car. I rarely even look at the Pistonheads classifieds either now that Autotrader have an iPad app. So it might be worth forking out to list on Autotrader to get more people seeing your improved advert.