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272 posts

210 months

Thursday 18th July 2013
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MrPicky

1,233 posts

296 months

Thursday 18th July 2013
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What about firstgroup.hua.hrsmart.com/ats/js_job_details.php?reqid=8590

Trainee Bus driver mentions £8.50 per hour - I don't know what first group are like as an employer but it is a way in to an industry.

Gargamel

16,349 posts

290 months

Thursday 18th July 2013
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Ok - standard offer.

PM me your CV and I will look and see if there is anything that could be improved upon.

The Job market is huge and your post gives no clue as to your skills, experience of areas of interest
You could be a graduate or a skilled professional or someone with a wide range of experience

I can't tell you where to look unless you tell us what you are looking for.

The internet is frustrating when you need a job. But I will try to help if you pm me


rog007

5,829 posts

253 months

Friday 19th July 2013
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Great offer above; take it!

If you've exhausted the internet with no joy, then you really are going to have to try the personal touch.

Make sure your CV is top notch (I don't mid having a look too (it's what I do)), then get a rucksack with 50 copies and some food and water in it and then walk the streets popping in to businesses that you feel would benefit from your skills and experiences and giving them a copy of your CV. If you drop 50, I'd be surprised if you didn't get a nibble, even if just from the fact that you took the initiative and time to go to the business. Good luck; and do let us know how you get on.

Gargamel

16,349 posts

290 months

Monday 22nd July 2013
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Odd this, an indeed it happens a lot on this forum.

OP asks for help, help is offered.

Not taken up ?

Is it something I said....


Scoticus

Original Poster:

272 posts

210 months

Monday 22nd July 2013
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Hi
thanks for the replies, just managed to get back on.

I dont know how to message on here, but below is my CV, with personal info removed (address, contact etc)



PROFILE

I am a hardworking and friendly individual who is reliable, honest and enjoys meeting new people. I have a positive outlook on life and take pride in striving to achieve the best in all that I do. I can take the initiative and work well within a team or on my own. I am adaptable and flexible with the ability to support team mates in a busy working environment.

Possessing good team-working abilities I can work alone and unsupervised using my initiative. I am seeking an opportunity to demonstrate my skills and abilities and would be happy to undertake further training whenever required.

I possess a friendly and outgoing personality and get on well with people both on a one-to-one basis and within groups. I am a hard working, dependable and trustworthy individual looking for an opportunity to develop and adapt my present skills. Having a positive nature, I am happy to accept any task and undergo any training to succeed in this.


KEY SKILLS & QUALITIES

-A genuine interest in working with and helping customers
-Excellent communication skills and a flair for explaining things
-Able to deal with customer complaints in a tactful and professional manner
-Cash handling and till operation experience
-Ability to meet deadlines and quality standards
-Strong sense of responsibility
-Take pride in my appearance
-Adaptable with a positive and flexible approach to my work
-Confident when dealing with difficult customers
-Comfortable when using or learning to use computerised equipment



EXPERIENCE

Customer Service
HERO Manvers, Rotherham
Vodafone
I worked here for over a year. Whilst here I gained the following experience:
Telephone customer service
Customer retention
Account management
Time keeping and target skills
Team management
Following up with customers with previous queries
Inbound customer service
General queries

Check out assistant
Doncaster
ASDA
I worked here for a little over two years. Whilst here I gained the following experience:
Face to face customer service
Money management
Security
Time keeping
Health and safty

TRAINING & EDUCATION (include job training)

The Rossington All saints, Church of England school and sports College

English – GCSE – A
Science – GCSE – A A A (triple award)
Math – GCSE – A A (double award)
Humanities – GCSE – B
Engineering – GCSE – B
Graphics – GCSE – A
French – GCSE – A
I.C.T – GCSE – A
Art – GCSE –B
P.E – GCSE -B
Music – GCSE – B

English – A level – A
Engineering – A level – A
Art – A level – A




Doncaster HUB College

Business Management and team leadership – Full pass

Key Skills level 3:
Communication
I.C.T
Maths
Leadership

I then went on to learn how to work with people with differing levels of Autism.

I also have a full, clean driving license, obtained March 2008.




~ References are available upon request ~

mu0n

2,348 posts

162 months

Monday 22nd July 2013
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Nice grades dude - I can't offer any advice though, sorry.

Scoticus

Original Poster:

272 posts

210 months

Monday 22nd July 2013
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Thanks very much

Gargamel

16,349 posts

290 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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Ok - will come back to this tomorrow

Gwagon111

4,422 posts

190 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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Okay, I've had a look at what you have posted there. Your academic grades are very impressive. The thing that would have me scratching my head, should a C.V. like that land on my desk, would be that you would appear to be a bright chap. You are telling me (in the C.V.) that you are a go getter, and are ambitious, You then go on to say you worked on the tills at ASDA. That doesn't stack up. I don't mean that as a criticism of folk who work at supermarkets, just that most people who work at supermarkets (shelf stacking, till work, etc) who are not doing it to raise funds during college breaks and the like, and who aren't doing it as a second job, are not that ambitious I.M.E. It could generate enough curiosity to want to haul the candidate in, to give them a chance to explain it, and give me a better idea of what I was dealing with. However, if it was a post which had attracted a lot of attention, I would put something like that in the round filing cabinet. Try to remember to add any posts, or experience you've had where you weren't paid (volunteering / charity etc.). Or if you had any sort of roles in clubs or societies outside of work. I know economic times are tough, and some good people have had to put up with rubbish jobs to get by. Anything that demonstrates a candidate has made an effort to shine outside of a work environment would help me.

rog007

5,829 posts

253 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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That's a typical attempt at a CV that fails to meet the requirement of a CV, and that is to impress upon the reader (potentially your next boss) what you can do for them in improving their business. Most people fall in to the trap of listing responsibilities when in fact they should be highlighting impact. Most of my CV clients struggle with this concept initially but the penny soon drops and we then end up with an outstanding CV regardless of the age, seniority and experience of the individual. Good luck!

Gargamel

16,349 posts

290 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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Scoticus said:
OK, first off my standard advice, CVs are subjective, what works for me, might get you binned elsewhere. However I read around 200 CVs per week.




PROFILE

Recent A'Level student looking for a position in which I can develop exisiting skills and build a long lasting career. A demonstrated ability to learn, and to acquire new skills quickly.

In my career to date I have shown reliablility, accuracy and an ability to communicate effectively with customers and team members. Finally I have strong IT skills and am familiar with most standard office software.



KEY COMPETENCIES

- People Orientated: A genuine interest in working with and helping customers.
- Communication: Articulate and capable of explaining concepts and process, simply.
- Numeracy: Reconciling Tills and Cash handling.
- Goal Orientated: Ability to work effectively to deadlines and quality standards.
- Flexibility: Manage well in amibigious situations, working on own initiative.
- Learning Agile: Have always learnt new tasks and skills quickly.


EXPERIENCE

VODAFONE

Customer Service

stomer Call Handling - processing over 100 calls per day
Average 1st time query resolution of 76% against company average of 62%
Customer retention - Averaged over 50% conversion rate in retaining out of contract customers
Account management - looked after small and medium business accouts for 30 companies
Consistently met personal targets for volume and sales conversions
Team management - Responsible for two people


Check out assistant
Doncaster
ASDA
I worked here for a little over two years. Whilst here I gained the following experience:
Face to face customer service
Money management
Security
Time keeping
Health and safty

TRAINING & EDUCATION (include job training)

The Rossington All saints, Church of England school and sports College

English – GCSE – A
Science – GCSE – A A A (triple award)
Math – GCSE – A A (double award)
Humanities – GCSE – B
Engineering – GCSE – B
Graphics – GCSE – A
French – GCSE – A
I.C.T – GCSE – A
Art – GCSE –B
P.E – GCSE -B
Music – GCSE – B

English – A level – A
Engineering – A level – A
Art – A level – A




Doncaster HUB College

Business Management and team leadership – Full pass

Key Skills level 3:
Communication
I.C.T
Maths
Leadership

I then went on to learn how to work with people with differing levels of Autism.

I also have a full, clean driving license, obtained March 2008.




~ References are available upon request ~
OK now play spot the difference.

Your CV is a list, it is subjective - IE YOU think you have excellent customer skills - I might have a different definition of excellent.

NUMBERS - all my revised bullet points are quantified. IE less subjective - you are evidencing each point (please revise my numbers for accuracy though.


So now where to send it. What do you really want as a job

Customer services ? Join a big firm.
Out door work ?
Office based ?
Accountacy training contract
Can you relocate
Have you thought about a degree or further vocational trainee
Do you want a sales based role

Give us a clue

BTW

https://bskyb.taleo.net/careersection/graduates/jo...


Hope this helps

GOOD LUCK and don;t give up

Gargamel

16,349 posts

290 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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Sorry there are a few typos in that - I am sure you will work them out

Scoticus

Original Poster:

272 posts

210 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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Thank you so much, I will take what you have done and apply it to my CV.

I have been reffered from the J/C to A4E
hopefully they will be able to point me in the right direction.

Job wise, i'm fairly happy doing anything, in fact its easier to say what I don't want to do

Warehouse work, due to medical problems (miss shaped spine)
working with food
refuge work
cleaning
working with the elderly, or severally disabled, just for the fact I am fairly squeamish and don't want to be cleaning up after people.

everything else I will consider.

As said, at the minute I do not have a car so travel is fairly limited: Doncaster and Sheffield mostly
Relocation is not possible

Further education again is not possible


If I am honest, I started this thread to see where I was going wrong and to collect as much advice as I could, thankfully its has worked due to the lovely people on here

Some Gump

13,018 posts

215 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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Op,

Slightly different take on it...

What / where do you want to be in 5, 10, 15 years time? What are your ambitions?
How are you going to get there?
Make a plan now, tailor your cv to that job and go for it. Interviewers will love seeing a ng termplan and not just a "do anything i spose" cv. If you're not bothered, why would you be a better candidate for the role than the next man?

More importantly, whatever job you get is just a steppng stone towards the powerfully built directorship of your choice. Your cv proves that when youset your mind to it, you excel. Now, you want THIS job for x reason, you're going to get it, be awesome and get promoted.

KFC

3,687 posts

159 months

Tuesday 23rd July 2013
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"safety" spelled wrong = straight in the bin.

If you can't be bothered spell checking something as important as a job application, it really doesn't give off the impression of someone you'd want to hire.

Gargamel

16,349 posts

290 months

Wednesday 24th July 2013
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KFC said:
"safety" spelled wrong = straight in the bin.

If you can't be bothered spell checking something as important as a job application, it really doesn't give off the impression of someone you'd want to hire.
Don't be ridiculous 99% of cvs contain an error.

eliot

11,995 posts

283 months

Wednesday 24th July 2013
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You need to decide on a skill or trade and focus on jobs which will take you down that path.

MrPicky

1,233 posts

296 months

Wednesday 24th July 2013
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Gargamel said:
Don't be ridiculous 99% of cvs contain an error.
Then it's a chance to get yourself into the top 1%.

KFC

3,687 posts

159 months

Wednesday 24th July 2013
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Gargamel said:
Don't be ridiculous 99% of cvs contain an error.
And thats fine if you want to work as a builders labourer or a bin man.

With reasonable jobs getting 100's of applications, can you afford to be making the same mistake as 99% of applicants?