Proof reader wanted for Nigerian financial services company.
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The last line. The last line

"Last week, some of our customers' accounts were unathourisedly accessed by unknown third party and it was resulted into some incoveniencies with us and customers. As a result of this, We therefore, send this message to notify you of the compulsory account and security upgrade which every customers must abide with in order to prevent future incoveniencies.
This process will enable you to migrate to a more secure online banking facility which has automatically configured to detect unauthourise access and immediately revoke your account, so that you will be on the safer side.
Kindly click this link at https://www.mybank.allianceleicester.co.uk/update and answer all the necessary questions. Your account will be instantly revoked and you will be immediately provided with step-by-step guide on how to re-activate and secure your account's access in 2 minutes.
Thanks for your Understanding as we are doing our best to protect you and your money.
Online Security Advisor
Leicester Alliance"

"Last week, some of our customers' accounts were unathourisedly accessed by unknown third party and it was resulted into some incoveniencies with us and customers. As a result of this, We therefore, send this message to notify you of the compulsory account and security upgrade which every customers must abide with in order to prevent future incoveniencies.
This process will enable you to migrate to a more secure online banking facility which has automatically configured to detect unauthourise access and immediately revoke your account, so that you will be on the safer side.
Kindly click this link at https://www.mybank.allianceleicester.co.uk/update and answer all the necessary questions. Your account will be instantly revoked and you will be immediately provided with step-by-step guide on how to re-activate and secure your account's access in 2 minutes.
Thanks for your Understanding as we are doing our best to protect you and your money.
Online Security Advisor
Leicester Alliance"
audidoody said:
The last line. The last line

"Last week, some of our customers' accounts were unathourisedly accessed by unknown third party and it was resulted into some incoveniencies with us and customers. As a result of this, We therefore, send this message to notify you of the compulsory account and security upgrade which every customers must abide with in order to prevent future incoveniencies.
This process will enable you to migrate to a more secure online banking facility which has automatically configured to detect unauthourise access and immediately revoke your account, so that you will be on the safer side.
Kindly click this link at https://www.mybank.allianceleicester.co.uk/update and answer all the necessary questions. Your account will be instantly revoked and you will be immediately provided with step-by-step guide on how to re-activate and secure your account's access in 2 minutes.
Thanks for your Understanding as we are doing our best to protect you and your money.
Online Security Advisor
Leicester Alliance"
Somehow they achieved a grammatical feat beyond most members of this site - correct usage of the apostrophe.
"Last week, some of our customers' accounts were unathourisedly accessed by unknown third party and it was resulted into some incoveniencies with us and customers. As a result of this, We therefore, send this message to notify you of the compulsory account and security upgrade which every customers must abide with in order to prevent future incoveniencies.
This process will enable you to migrate to a more secure online banking facility which has automatically configured to detect unauthourise access and immediately revoke your account, so that you will be on the safer side.
Kindly click this link at https://www.mybank.allianceleicester.co.uk/update and answer all the necessary questions. Your account will be instantly revoked and you will be immediately provided with step-by-step guide on how to re-activate and secure your account's access in 2 minutes.
Thanks for your Understanding as we are doing our best to protect you and your money.
Online Security Advisor
Leicester Alliance"
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