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PlaneFan

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180 posts

194 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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Thoughts? Shot in Germany, Portugal and Spain.

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Cheers
PF

andy-xr

13,204 posts

233 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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There's a load of waste in 1) that you could probably crop out or use a longer lens on, whether that was your intent or not I dont know. Didnt do much for me having extra foreground in

6 is just ace though hehe

Scott330ci

18,294 posts

230 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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IMO 1&2 are fantastic

paul911

2,771 posts

262 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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Scott330ci said:
IMO 1&2 are fantastic
+1 yes

No 6 is very cool thumbup

Yellabelly

2,258 posts

282 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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No 1 is actually spot on to the rule of thirds, which just shows how wrong that can be. In this instance I would crop a good amount out of the foreground, but it is a good image as is No2 but No6 has it all, especially his expression "WTF are you doing there???" wink))

YB

JohnS

938 posts

313 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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2 and 6 are the pick of the bunch for me.

  1. 1 - I would have used a longer lens or cropped a bit more to get closer in.
  2. 3 - the cars just get lost in the background

GreigM

6,740 posts

278 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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Yellabelly said:
No 1 is actually spot on to the rule of thirds, which just shows how wrong that can be. In this instance I would crop a good amount out of the foreground, but it is a good image as is No2 but No6 has it all, especially his expression "WTF are you doing there???" wink))

YB
shows how tastes vary - I really like #1 - that amount of tarmac gives it a dramatic edge that it would lose with a closer crop

Mike_CTR

2,726 posts

230 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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4, 5 and 6 are my favourites.

Great work smile


GetCarter

31,243 posts

308 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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1 and 6 and I'd crop 1

Good work.

rhinochopig

17,932 posts

227 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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Some lovely pics - love the fact that you captured the gathering storm in the background . That scuba diver is a bit lost though.

Busa_Rush

6,930 posts

280 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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I like 1, the track adds a dramatic feel to it. I'm not a pro so I might be wrong, but it adds a lot to the picture.

4 and 5 are particularly good too smile

PlaneFan

Original Poster:

180 posts

194 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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Thanks for the comments. The feedback is very interesting and shot one is definitely a marmite one. I personally like it due to the expanse of shaded foreground tarmac. Some might work better when not in a 3:2 format. Also interesting that there is no comment on #8...one of my favourites lol.

Thanks again.
PF

GetCarter

31,243 posts

308 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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PlaneFan said:
Also interesting that there is no comment on #8...one of my favourites lol.
I think it's because it's an 'anyone could do it, and most of us have' pic, whereas the others have more interest/action etc. Still a fine photo mind.

itsnotarace

4,685 posts

238 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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1 only works at Paul Ricard imho. In this case the tyremarks round the corner work well but the foreground is meh and I would crop the entire top half of that shot

6 is best of the bunch


Edited by itsnotarace on Friday 29th October 16:46

muppetdave

2,118 posts

254 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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Really nice set there, some interesting shots in there.

jimmy156

3,834 posts

216 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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Nice shots mate. I personally like No.1, the space below the car gives it a sense of isolation, makes it feel as if its a long way into a distace race running on its own.

As others have said, No.6 is a cracker and probably my favourite.

ellis427

1,653 posts

208 months

Friday 29th October 2010
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6 is awesome.

God i love that ford gt!

curtisl

1,406 posts

235 months

Saturday 30th October 2010
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That is a magnificent set, 1 being my favorite. It is good to see something a bit different. well done.

xspencex

1,534 posts

265 months

Friday 1st July 2011
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No bikey, up in the Far north west of Scotland with the wife and pooch for some r'n'r. Seeing loads of bikers up here makes me quite jealous! Roads are bloody amazing.

tim-b

1,279 posts

239 months

Friday 1st July 2011
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I like the composition of no. 1 - dramatic and creative, but the processing is a bit bland and washed out....a bolder approach (to the processing) would really give the composition more 'confidence' IMHO

3 doesn't work for me, perhaps waiting a split-second for the foreground car to come closer (so it would be on the left of the image and the chasing car on the right) and be less hidden by the crest.

5 is a great idea, but I think the wide perspective is a little off-putting. I know it was probably pretty tight in there, but if this was taken from even 2-3m back it would be a winner for me.

8 is ok, not as original as the others and although I assume the element in the foreground is some tyre debris, it does look like a dried-up dog turd and is distracting as a result. Maybe getting closer and focussing on the shredded rubber (keeping the pit-buildings in shot, in or out of the dof) would be a more original and interesting approach?

2&4 on the other hand are very well executed and processed, especially love the dramatic sky on 4. 2 could benefit from a little wider view to show more of those lovely colours in the background.

But it's 6&7 that are the heroes here! Both excellent shots that I can't see how to improve on!thumbup

All this IMHO of course, overall a great set! I take it you're a pro?