Couple of pics, What do you Think?

[grant.d]

Hi,

My brother and I decided to give his car a clean and while we were at it decided to get a few snaps, this is our first time out with the camera (to get some decent ones of the car) by the way so please be gentle!. Click to view full size.










What do you think?

Edited by grant.d on Saturday 14th April 19:09

[Rednut05]

I quite like them.

It's a shame that the boat and car seem merged. It would have been nicer to have a clear horizon or to have the boat distanced from the car.

David

[pastrana72]

they look cool to me,

nice pictures.

[trackdemon]

grant.d said:

What do you think?

Massively over processed TBH. Composition on #1 has potential but the boat destroys it.

[sstein]

Yes, I would lose the boat.

The colours in the first one seem very flat as well? I take it these have been photoshopped.

I still think they are really nice pictures though I would be happy if i had took them.

-

Stuart

[ronj]

Grant ,
hope you dont mind but i could not resist doing some changes on your pic in P/Shop.



Ron.

[TonyHetherington]

Hi!
Nice location, and lovely clean great car to be taking shots of! However, I think the boat/car mix isn't seperate enough. By moving around the car you could have seperated the two and I think that would have worked nicely!
Also, by getting lower the car would have seemed more imposing (as it is in real life!!!).

Hope that helps

Tony (a very very amateur amateur!)